Pilow fights are only fun when filled with soda cans or bricks!!!

Well, that was back in the bad old days of the sport. Nowadays the IPFF (International Pillow Fighting Federation) doesn't allow it.

Hilarious topic that I wouldn't have thought of. Not sure why you need pumps and a fancy hat to have a pillow fight I usually do it in slippers and PJs but to each his own.

Yeah, but I like to dress up for the televised bouts.

It seemed to me the narrator was describing theirself as a fashionable DDR champion or something. Highly original and funny idea, I wish the song was longer so you could have expanded on that.

Thanks! I had to google DDR, it sounds interesting!

(Artistry) The problem with pumps and a hat is that they can put a "drag" on your swing. Funny idea, for some reason it made me picture "The Karate Kid" as a pillow-fighting story.

That'll work!

(Artistry) I thought it was cool how you used this sleepy sounding OS and related it to a pillow fight. I imagined it in slow motion for some reason, which made it so much funnier IMO. Great job!

Thanks!

(Artistry) A coupla weird lines here and there, but otherwise a very good parody about a topic I'm surprised hasn't been used more in parodies. 555 hundred feathers!

Much obliged!

Okay--I'm sorry--but what on Earth? Is this like a pillow fight league or something? I mean pumps, hats, fancy clothing--I think I missed something. As for "Guys with panty lines tight-stretched o'er booty fat" I'm not sure how this character came across guys with tight panties over fat booties but then again I've seen a drag queen who fits the description there so I can see that I suppose. I don't know buddy, this one was a stretch to me--I had guess it's one of those where I'd need a longer song to allow further development cause a pillow fight by itself can be funny and would have worked but turning it into a sport without any kind of pre or post information kinda threw me off. Also, while it seems to pace okay it read a bit rough to the original because the rhyme scheme was changed a lot-in some cases feminine rhymes became masculine ones which messed with the stressed of the syllables making it hard to follow, though it could probably be turned into a recording it would be difficult. Great idea, perhaps needed a bit more time to shine it though. . .So you know, please never take anything I say to heart, contestants who are familiar with me know I am a very honest participant and aim only to convey areas where I think people could be stronger-its not meant to insult or judge ability, I've seen your good work as well-so I know what you are capable of, and gave a 555 on principle, just pointing out some things to consider for you.

Thanks! You obviously put a lot of thought into that comment!